Trying my hand a Haiku…

Night

When I see
The light is out
Night is here

OK so I see now that I can not count syllables correctly for the Haiku...so attempt I failed so round two....

NIGHT
The night sky was red
Warm mist in the clean wind blows
Droplets bloomed out pink


I think this second attempt looks about right.....

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